Monday, January 18, 2010

Lonely Soul

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Synopsis:
The eldest of the McAlister siblings is responsible and always putting his brother and sister before himself. Now that Erick and Elizabeth were enjoying their married lives, the time had come for Michael Casey McAlister to find his soulmate. A man with a deep sense of family and honor, yet at times could be manipulative and very controlling, always doing what he thought was best for others.

Featured on The Most Dangerous Bachelors list with his brother, but for his love for daring outdoor activities; he searched for a woman who wasn’t a high society princess. With his good looks, wealth and sexual prowess, he has attracted many ladies but when the one he thinks is Miss Right doesn’t like his dog he shows her the door. Lonely and discouraged, he dedicates himself into a New York City community garden project with his friends and busies himself with his comic strip he has created under the name of Mike Casey.

Mike meets Lauren “Wren” Avery with the help of their dogs in the park while he’s working on a cartoon. He sees her as a chance to improve himself and not follow his father’s path of unhappiness. He certainly didn’t expect to fall in love with the graphic artist. Wren falls in love with him as the cartoonist not knowing he is the co-owner of McAlister Enterprises, the same company she works for. He knows he’s being wrong in not telling her the truth but his world falls apart when his love is transferred to the London base and she finds out who he really is. He realizes that in while building the company and interfering in other people’s lives he may have lost control of his own life and what truly matters.




The package arrived that morning before he left for work.

He didn’t bother opening it because he knew it was the portrait Andrew Somerby began painting of him a couple of months ago. Michael had spent the holidays with his family at Hampton House in Sussex, England and stayed while his brother was gone on his honeymoon. During his sojourn he visited the London base of McAlister Enterprises and spent some time with Andrew in his studio. Andrew was in charge of the two Somerby banks in England but was also the famous underground artist known as Puzzola.

Michael was hesitant to open the package. He had seen the portrait before he left London but Andrew would sometimes work on a piece after the model was gone. The fact that artist Puzzola was known for capturing the essence of a person on canvas was what scared him. Andrew had done a self-portrait titled Painted Soul that was sexually charged with emotional frustration. He then did a portrait of Erick titled Tormented Soul which captured the emotional torment Erick held inside as he searched for a normal life.

Michael was afraid to face his soul.

When he got home that night, he changed his clothes and grabbed a beer from the refrigerator. Michael stared at the box for a few moments before he opened it. Carefully he unwrapped the canvas from its protective plastic and placed it on the couch so he could step back to look at it. He picked up a small note card that had fallen out.

“Lonely Soul,” he read out loud. “Oh, boy.”

Raising his eyes to the painting Michael took in the image. He was seated on the floor sketching in a book with his dog Ariel cuddled along his leg; his hand lay on her back, with her head resting on his thigh. His affection for his pet was strong and it showed in the picture.

When he looked into his own eyes he recognized the emotion. Andrew definitely titled it appropriately. He was drawn into his own soul and it was empty, except for a sense of isolation, and loneliness.

He tilted his head as he viewed the piece more intensely. His elbow balanced on his bent knee, his hand held a pencil close to his mouth. While he was in London, Michael decided to quit shaving his face and was pleased with the appearance; Andrew
used soft brush strokes to suggest the facial hair. In the portrait, his head dipped, navy blue eyes looked at him under dark brows, looking as if he were in contemplation.

Knowing Andrew like he did, Michael was sure there was a deeper meaning in the details of the painting so he began to look for clues. Noticing the jeans and cotton shirt, was definitely him. He wore fine suits but preferred to be in jeans and sweatshirts. The sleeves of his shirt were rolled up, a symbol that he wasn’t afraid of work.

The sketchbook and pencil represented his artistic self, something his father discouraged but Mike pursued anyway. Eventually, his father accepted the artistic sides of both his sons and actually began to encourage it. Michael felt the time spent at his drawing table kept him grounded as he built the company. His sister, Elizabeth, had a successful career being a professional painter and owned galleries in Chicago, New York, and London.

Erick painted portraits for relaxation. His style was similar to Andrew’s, probably because they were as close as brothers.
Michael, on the other hand, had a more sketch-like style. He preferred to draw than paint.

Michael continued to scrutinize the picture for symbolism. White shirt, truthfulness and honesty, worn open in a relaxed state; tanned skin, good health and outdoorsman. No jewelry, not even a watch meant that he wasn’t materialistic but the pillow behind him carried the McAlister plaid to show his family honor.

Focusing on his hand holding the pencil, Michael noticed that a finger was resting on his lips. Many times when he’s deep in thought, he has the tendency to touch his lips with a finger. Because of the way his head was slightly tipped, he suspected that was the moment Andrew had captured. He must have been deep in thought, perhaps thinking of the sketch, and just looked up for an instant.

When he looked into his own eyes he recognized the emotion. Andrew definitely titled it appropriately. He was drawn into his own soul and it was empty, except for a sense of isolation, and loneliness.

Michael shook his head in attempt to view the painting differently. In the portraits Andrew had done of himself and Erick, there were ghost-like suggestions of a woman surrounding the subjects. Michael found no suggestions in his portrait. He was
alone, like he was in real life. Then he noticed a simple sketch made on the book in the painting.

Leaning toward the canvas, he tilted his head for a better view. It was a drawing of him and a woman in a lovers embrace. The woman had hair just past her shoulders and an athletic build. He smiled and wondered how Andrew came up with such an image. Perhaps he would find his soulmate through his own art. Michael continued to smile at the thought and picked up his gift.

A wall had been prepared for the special piece for months. He took a moment to pound a nail into the wall and then tenderly hung Lonely Soul. The painted eyes still made him feel uncomfortable because what the portrait told him was true. He was
lonely.

Ariel pawed at his leg impatiently. It was past the time for her daily walk in the park. Michael grabbed his backpack, tossed in a Frisbee and water bottle. As an afterthought, he added a couple of pencils and a sketchbook.


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Thursday, January 14, 2010

Thursday Thirteen - 13 Places to Nibble



Everybody likes a kiss that is full of sensuality; but try turning up the heat a bit and add the spice of sensual biting. A kiss is more than a just kiss with a nibble, it becomes irresistible and a tantalizing key of seduction.

Imagine a soft kiss, running your lips over your lover’s skin. Opening your mouth only enough to allow your teeth to graze the area you are kissing. Take a small bit of skin into your mouth – don’t pinch or bite too hard. Give your lover chills not sharp pains… unless you’re both into that kind of thing. Balance kisses, licks, and bites…some gentle, some harder. Pay attention to your lover’s reaction.

Don’t drool or leave bite marks. Focus on the erogenous zones.

Good Nibble Places

1. Nipples
2. Neck – all sides
3. Try kissing & nibbling the neck from behind… hmmm….
4. Ear – just don’t breathe into the ear… the sound of loud, heavy breathing isn’t romantic


5. Inside of the thigh
6. Inside of the knee
7. Inside of the elbow
8. Underside of the wrist
9. The muscle along the backbone
10. Back of the shoulders

11. The hip bone and down toward the crease where your lover’s leg begins

12. Lick & kiss your way along the ribcage, under the arm, with little nibbles
13. In the peak of a heated moment, being bitten on the shoulder can be highly erotic


Where’s your favorite place?

Friday, January 8, 2010

Vote for Lonely Soul


Lonely Soul has been nominated for an award on Editors and Preditors. Visit P & E to place your vote. The books are listed in alphabetical order. Vote, then you have to give your name & email. You'll receive an conformation email which you have to respond to. I'd appreciate your vote.

Thank you!
Hugs & Chocolate,
Mary

Thursday, December 17, 2009

Thursday Thirteen - 13 Hotties from my File



I woke up this morning and realized it's Thursday and I forgot to make a list. I couldn't think of anything so I'm simply pulling up some photos from my files that give me inspiration when I'm creating characters. I hope you don't mind my forgetfulness.

1. This yummy fellow looks like my character Chet Keller.



2. This would be the young Duncan McAlister in Fortunate Soul.




3. This has to be the body of Michael McAlister.









4.Erick McAlister can seduce a woman with a whisper.











5.Steve Keller is a man hard to catch, but when you do... lick him all over.










6.




7.Rob Ashton.RIP. I wanted him for the Painted Soul cover.



8.The Painted Soul










9. Puzzola's intense sexiness was the result of watching Queen of the Damn way too much.









10.
This pic makes me want to write something other than contemporary romance.


11. I'm a little tongue tied with this one.











12. Trent was the inspiration for Trevor Dillinger.










13. My muse.


*sigh* There are so many more...
My muse put his wings away and helped decorate for the holiday.

Uhm.... you'll have to excuse me now.

Wednesday, December 9, 2009

Thursday Thirteen - 13 Romantic Fragrances for Him & Her





Tis the season for gift giving... la, la, la.
After a bit of research I found some yummy scents to add to your gift list. What better than to give the gift of fragrance! It's the gift that keeps giving. Just think... every time he wears that yummy scent, you want to simply rip his clothes off. Or... if you wear that special fragrance, you'll feel sexy and maybe he'll give you unlimited spending on his credit card. Now, if he does that... make sure you pick up some chocolate and whipping cream!

For Him:
1. Sean John I Am King: For the Over-the-Top Guy
Homme is phenomenal as well.

2. Calvin Klein CK One Summer: For Your Summer Fling
I’d count Polo Black by Ralph Lauren perfect for Mr. Tall, Dark and Handsome.

3. Love & Luck by Ed Hardy: For the New Beau

4. Only the Brave by Diesel: For the Tough Guy

5. Euphoria for Men by Calvin Klein: For the Best Sex You Ever Had
For an alternative to this one, try Reaction by Kenneth Cole and you will certainly find yourself reacting! Hot, hot, hot!

6. Oceans Water Pure by Nautica: For the Beach Bum

7. Fuel for Men by Donna Karan: For the Metrosexual
Personally, I like a man in Armani Code and a scarf… nothing else.

8. Cartier Roadster: For the Guy Who has a Need for Speed
For Her:

9. Narciso Rodriguez Narciso for Her: the classic fragrance for the sensuous woman.

10. Chanel No.5 Eau Première: the iconic classic that Marilyn Monroe wore in bed.

11. Christian Dior Hypnotic Poison: works on guys like a magical charm!

12. Ralph Lauren Romance: very romantic and perfect for that special woman in your life!

13. J'adore from the Dior line of designer fragrances: a very sophisticated scent perfect for the working woman or mom.

Many of these fragrances run from $40 - $100, but if you're a smart shopper you'll hit the special sales and use coupons. Don't forget about those impostor fragrances too!

What's your favorite scent? What's on your wish list?